[30M][Critique] Can we be a little bit more mean about my profile? I want to make it actually good

Your self summary says what you are looking for and hints at what you like, but I think you could include more information about what kind of person you are versus just your hobbies. Based on your profile, I can determine a lot about things you enjoy, but not too much about your personality. What excites you? Is there anything you are interested in learning? What are you looking for in a romantic partner? What are your long term goals for life? All good answers to put in this section, summed up without too many words, but enough to give someone a good sense of what you're like. Maybe a quote, or a joke you like, would work too.

It would be helpful to add more diverse conversation hooks. Maybe we just aren't compatible, but the only thing I could thing of to message you about was types of fish to cook. When I redid my profile, I found success in adding more things like "I want to learn more about x, maybe you can give me some pointers?" or "Ask me about x!", since they were more open ended and invitingly worded.

Your profile comes across as you are looking for male buddies to me. Nothing wrong with that if you specifically only want women interested in baseball or cards, but if you had some broader interests, I think it would entice a greater diversity of women to message you, whom might not be interested in those things right off the bat but would be willing to cultivate an interest in or learn about them.

Hope that helps!

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