Heya, this was awesome. We often see comedians really early on careers here, and based on the venue in guessing you are maybe fairly early on. That set well surpassed the venue though. I know this all just me telling you it's great, but i watched it twice and you're lit! Sometimes you see someone here that you're like, yeah, I'll be paying to see that in a few, and this is one. Serious kudos.

The constructives I've got are mostly covered (keep your persona but slightly less movement, match your punchlines to the movements a bit more). Your stance in the 'I'll never be a fucking father' is perfect and i think you can use that more. Sparingly more. I thought the start to your bro bit was good, some may miss the joke of the intro but they'll catch up fast. It was good you immediately said he'd be cool with it, that puts one at ease when joking about mental illness.

The bit about your mum and your dreams, there were a couple bits i reckon you can refine, maybe the cuts handled it. It felt to me like you flicked between big and little you a tad, like when you said 'i tell jokes,' it sounds like adult you is responding, unless you'd already covered that kid-you is a comedian previously. Also your mum was coming across like she was just telling the truth, terrifyingly honestly, and then the 'they love little kids just like you' sounded more like the shit parents do when they're intentionally trying to make a point (like an 'if you pick your nose and the wind changes, it'll get stuck up there' riff, if you know that one). I get that's part of your segue, but you could craft it to not prevaricate on her being honest vs parental fuckery and still land with what you learned that day in the same way.