I'm going to need to write back to the editor. Is this email okay to send? (I wasn't sure whether to mention the other interest I've gotten recently or not.)

Thank you so much for responding. I took all your suggestions to mind and made significant revisions (which I've listed below). I am planning to dive back into it and figure it will take me another couple of weeks to polish up that version.

I wanted to thank you again for your keen insight. I think all these changes have made the book much stronger and I hope you agree. ​ I just want to take one more pass through the manuscript and make some additional tweaks and read through to make sure I've caught everything before sending this back. I hope to get it back to you before the end of the month. I hope that is okay?

Recently, I’ve had some renewed interest in the manuscript as there was an open door period with a publisher in the UK this month and then #DVpit last month. I got some additional publisher interest and requests from agents for the full manuscript. I have sent them the original version, not the revised version, which I am planning to send back to you exclusively once I finish polishing it.

Thank you so much.

Best Regards,