It is true that this is from a report I made, but i got it back with some errors. So now i have to fix them. I have made some corrections
Correction: There is used a lot of swear words in this TV series about a prison break.
“The setting of the story is always playing a big part in movies,” the professor explained to the audience.
The two young men had a fine dinner, and they thought that the roast tasted very well.
Correction: The two young men had a fine dinner, and they thought that the roast tasted very good. You use well to describe an action. You use good to describe people or things
You have to rely on that the police will help in case of an emergency.
Which of the two houses look less expensive, do you think?
Correction: Which of the two houses look less expensive, what do you think? A question was asked so WH words should be used. The person is asking for information therefor what should be used.
Correction: Tonight, I will take a picture of the presidential candidate as soon as he arrives at the convention.