[Critique Monday] - Post your books here for feedback!

Well, I've decided to start writing short instalove erotic romances instead of straight up erotica, but I've haven't been getting any page reads or sales lately. I used to write chat-fiction on an app for free, so I format my published stories in a chat-fiction-like style! lol! I would like feedback on the blurb of my latest story. I write fantasy and paranormal short romances that contain sex scenes full of squirting pussies and cocks, lactation, and sometimes light BDSM play. I want people to enjoy the romance in my story—as well as the sex scenes. Just can't get any dang page reads tho :(

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0BLKSCDYD/ref=dbs_a_def_awm_bibl_vppi_i24

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