Critique Thread: Post all [Critique]s here! - July 06, 2018

Hello My name's Ellie and I'm 17 yrs old :3 I've been "singing" from time to time for like 2 yrs now and tbh i don't think there's as much progress as there could have been but that's because I was busy with school I did some vocal work out for a few weeks or months idk exactly, breathing exercises to breath from the diaphragm and such Im planning to start vocal lessons in september or later in the year, because I really want to improve and I dont want to damage my throat/vocal chords Anyway here's some recordings (lyrics are all by me) https://soundcloud.com/elicka-o/no-words-wip I produced the bg music (yea I also wanna be a producer and composer lol ordered myself a midi keyboard a few days ago i cant wait for it to arrive) https://soundcloud.com/elicka-o/draft The bg is from youtube Excuse my horrible editing it's just a guide not the finished product Ik it should be louder but im kinda shy.. https://soundcloud.com/elicka-o/theres-always-time-to-write-a This one too

Oh and there's also this If anyone could help me figure out my vocal range I would really appreciate it :3 It is cringy though https://soundcloud.com/elicka-o/range Dont worry I never sing high enough that my voice breaks like that, this was just a one time thing lol Also if u could tell me my voice type that would be great :")

Im aware that my singing and rapping is bad lol but it's ok its nothing to be discouraged by because I can always improve What things should I work on? What do you think of my singing? No mean comments pls Thank you

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