Desperate for advice (writer's block?)

No, I get it. It was fair assessment.

I mean A is supposed to be 18-year-old and the story takes place over the years as she matures and how she changes. The whole being pure etc. is because she is supposed to be that way because it ties directly to B. So I can see why it wouldn't appeal at first.

Also about the danger thing, I kinda wanted it to be like... grave danger sort of thing. Where B will know that A is in trouble and will have to save them which serves as a reveal to the world that B actually exists. They're kind of connected? If that makes sense and I want that one moment to trigger that connection between them. Idk it's my first book and may sound boring, but thanks anyway. :)

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