Forgetful

Thank you for the feedback. I don't have any formal training in regards to creative writing so this was very eye opening for me. I'll be sure to do some reading and edit my poems accordingly (I definitely write in a rush, no edits, ending rhymes in mind. Amazing how you clocked that. Almost creepy aha). I am curious though. Why did you choose to critique my poem? I had a peek at your profile to assess what kind of feedback I'd get and saw that mine is the only one you've critiqued. Is it a case of mine being so thoroughly mediocre and full of obvious beginner mistakes that it felt rude not to? /s
This is the most professional and honest feedback I've had though so it's very welcome

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