Here, I modified it a little to make it easier to read. I am sorry if this came off as dickish, I am just trying to provide some constructive criticism.

Aww yes! Our girls look out for other girls! I am all over that! One time I was out with my friends and my boyfriend. We were dancing in the club with said boyfriend as well as my best gay friend, when some girl comes over and starts saying really loudly how "my husband is coming back any minute" and such. I was so thankful and it made me laugh a lot. It took some effort convincing her that those 2 guys were actually my boyfriend and gay best friend. She held me and pretended we were old friends until she was sure I was okay! It was amazing! Haha, thank you beautiful lady!