Help me with my personal statement?? I am an international student, btw.

Oh my goodness, thank you so much!! Im applying to King's, SOAS, Saint Andrews and Warwick btw. here is my statement so far: (and if you want me to email it to you please give your email!!! tysm) Global politics have changed so rapidly in such a short time span, and the implications and theories as to how fascinate me. Growing up in Tucson, Arizona, a city at the forefront of relations between the U.S. and Mexico, has made it a pertinent part of my life. I started out casually following events between the two countries, and eventually this snowballed into impulsively checking the news and studying the political structures of other countries. I am particularly fascinated by how much the Middle East has changed, and gradually I began to have a profound interest in the region’s politics.

My AP world history class sparked questions in my head about the current state of the world and my country’s role in it. I thought deeply about how conflicts in Iraq, Syria and Afghanistan could have an impact on my life so far away, and I started to have deep discussions after school with my teachers. My favorite units were about Islam and immigration, and I was surprised that my previously held convictions were questioned so fruitfully. I found myself wanting to talk with people of different beliefs so as to garner fresh perspectives, which not only heightened my speaking skills, but also my analytical skills.

These debates captivated me even further and I took it upon myself to read more about the Middle East. I read titles such as ISIS: A History, by Fawaz A. Gerges and Descent into Chaos by Ahmed Rashid. The books increased my critical thinking skills and gave me thorough analysis into the inner workings of the Islamic world. They also cemented my earlier theories about how the wars in this region affect us in more ways than one, and I was glad to have a solid foundation. I am excited to study more about the roles of global politcs and the Middle East at university.

My job as a phone bank operator at a political campaign unmasked crucial skills that I believe are important for this degree. I worked with people from varying ages, races, and social classes which made the role of teamwork even more important. I am confident speaking with anyone and presenting my ideas and knowledge to them, even if they may disagree.

Studying in the U.K. would be an invaluable experience because of the world class education and its proximity to many other countries. As a student of international relations I find it vital to be in surroundings where my ideas are constantly challenged and I am constantly growing and learning.

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