Hey guys! Could you please rate my design and say if you`d buy a white t-shirt with it for about 17$, thank you!

Sure, let's focus on how absurd and completely baseless-bordering-on-meaningless your "critique" was. For starters, you say you like the typography. What fucking typography? He typed out a single word ina gothic/medieval font. Then you talk about the context mood and meaning. What fucking mood and meaning? It's a picture of two cherries underneath the word "undefeated". Somehow in your paranoid mind this translates to nazi imagery. Congrats, only yourself, apparently rural Germans and paranoid schizophrenics would see that yet for some fucking inane reason you thought that was a legitimate criticism. "The colors glare in relation to the plain black name". Do you actually know anything about what you're talking about? My guess is you have zero background or qualifications in any of this. Then you suggest changing the fruit. Congrats, you've just suggested changing the entire design without any context or even the slightest clue as to why it's a cherry in the first place. Apparently this would be solved by adding a shell and some arrows.

So in summation, you looked at a picture of two cherries under a single word and decided that OP is a neo-nazi and that the cherries should have arrows sticking out of them, or be a coconut apparently.

You have no idea what you're talking about and your criticism is absolute garbage.

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