I like this idea a lot. Disclaimer: I will not have time to review others till tomorrow, but I will definitely do so. Concrit takes time, and I want to take enough time to do it properly.
I posted this chapter on Wednesday. My main questions are:
- Is the pacing good?
-Do the action scenes flow nicely? Are they easy to follow? Are they easy to visualize?
-Do the actions of the protagonists and antagonists seem logical? Do the antagonists feel like enough of a threat?
Title: The Observer Effect
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: M
Word count: About 5500 for the chapter
Genre: Mystery/action/adventure
Warnings: Graphic depictions of violence
Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/32711164/chapters/97367283
Background info (in spoilers because I know some fellow redditors are following it): Viktor and Hermione have been kidnapped by some anti-government terrorists. These terrorists are immune to harmful magic due to a protective amulet, but not to physical violence.
Thank you so much!