How am I coming along? How to improve? Honesty is the most helpful criticism.

So...this may be unwanted because it isn't related to "passing." I think you pass very well. This is just a general beauty tip. Your hair seems very dry, which I relate to like crazy. My hair is both oily on the roots and dry on the ends. Whyyyyy? Anyway, beauty tip, use a split end mended on your hair except the roots such as StrongSexyHair Seal the Deal. Work it into your hair (avoiding the roots) while your hair is damp. Also actually try to avoid shampooing your hair daily (shower caps, dry shampoo) and if need be you can rinse your hair with warm water and even use apple cider vinegar for rinses. Sorry, I know this isn't exactly what you asked for, but thought it might be helpful.

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