You definitely still need to focus on macro:
These macro mistakes cost you the game. You'll see that your opponent's army graph is bigger than yours throughout the game. This is because you didn't get the workers you were supposed to have by that time and thus couldn't produce enough units.
Your gas bank also increased by quite a lot. If your 1200 gas was actually spent minerals, that would've been 20+ extra marines. If you managed to setup your economy properly, you could've rolled him with just marines.
Lastly (and this is really less important), you need to tech up and get better units (marauders, mines, liberators) if you want to easily roll that army. The reason why I say this is the least important is that you were already so far behind because of the macro mistakes that your army composition wouldn't have made a big difference, while having more stuff could've helped more.
Get yourself a build order (learn something like a reaper expand which you can use against all the races) and practice the first 6 minutes of that (against easy AI) until you can get close to the pro that you have copied it from. After that, you can start owning the ladder and improve some more.
GLHF!