If you could re-write the dialogue in the Obi-Wan vs Vader scene from episode three, what would it look like?

From Star Wars: The Blackened Mantle (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDLM-dXP-KE)

Anakin: What are you doing out here? Padme: Anakin... Anakin: I'm all right. What's wrong? Padme: The chancellor... Obi-Wan said... you've become his apprentice. Anakin: When did you see him ? Padme: Please... Tell me none of it is true. It can't be. Tell me he is wrong... Anakin: He was wrong about a lot of things. Padme: He said you deserted the Temple. Anakin: Where is he ? Padme: It doesn't matter. We don't need him. We can... leave all of this behind. Anakin: Not until I know you're safe. That's what all of this is for. Padme: Because of a dream ? I don't care what you saw. Anakin: You haven't seen the death of everyone you love. I would've saved all of them if the Jedi hadn't held me back. But with the Council gone... I can save you. Padme: I know you're scared. But this time, let me save you. Leave the Chancellor before it's too late. Anakin: Why would I do that. He can teach us how to live forever. Padme: We'll grow old with the galaxy. Then I can overthrow him. And we can rule it. Start an age of peace that will last forever. Nothing will keep us apart. Padme: I can't believe it. Obi-Wan was right. You've changed. Anakin: Obi-Wan should have told me the truth. The Jedi had their chance. I'm glad they're dead. Padme: You can't mean that. Anakin... We can't follow you down this path. Anakin: Obi-Wan is here. Padme: If you won't listen to me... Then please, liste to him. Please, just come back home with us. I still love you! Anakin: You liar! Padme: No! Anakin: You don't love me. You brought him to kill me Padme : No... Obi-Wan : Let her go. Let. Her. Go. Anakin: You turned her against me Obi-Wan: You've done that yourself Anakin: Only I can save Padme Obi-Wan: You've led her to the very moment you swore to prevent. It's not too late. You can step back from the precipice. Let go of the Dark Side and help me defeat the Chancellor Anakin: I'm done with your orders. The Jedis never accepted me. My abilities always terrified you. You kept my eyes shut. But now they are open. Soon, I'll see further than anyone alive. Obi-Wan: You think this is power ? Anakin: You can't begin to imagine Obi-Wan: The dark side is hollowing you out outside. You're a puppet! Anakin: If the dark side is so weak... Prove it to me. Obi-Wan: If you want to fight me... I can't stop you. But I won't kill you. Anakin: Then this will be easy.

Obi-wan: I have failed you anakin, I have lost you. Anakin: Then you are the last Jedi Knight in the galaxy. Obi-Wan: Anakin, wake up! How could you let Palpatine do this ? Anakin: The Jedi left me no other choice. Obi-Wan: We always have a choice. Anakin: I never told you about my last dream.

Last line from Obi-Wan when he left Anakin burning : "My brother is already dead. You killed him."

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