First of all, you are gorgeous! I would keep your about me and looking for section shorter. Just talk about a few positive attributes you have and in the looking for section don’t mention finances. I used to leave off saying “if I sound like what you’re looking for, message me.” While I’m out of the sugar world now, I had better luck being positive and making it more about the SD than myself. You have to have the look but you also have to be someone who a man can confide in. I always enjoyed hearing about my SDs lives or struggles and what do you know, I’m going to school to become a psychologist haha. Good luck pretty girl! Lots of great advice was given above!