Played starforge cyclone in legion, this was my tree, gear taken off character already. Some of the nodes I took opposite ranger were because of inspired learning

Looks fine but personally I'd get more life and replace conc effect with fortify, replace bronns with koam's heart, get damage through better crit chance and multi. Transcendent flesh opposite marauder helps a lot. I think I only had 1.5m or so damage which was enough but almost 8k HP and a a decent chunk of fortify effect (lethal pride under dualist). I'd keep my eyes out for a decent watcher's eye