I think that the biggest issue is that there really isnt much here to latch on to, as an audience. If you give your video title a theme "Surfing etc etc etc" then it establishes what the video is actually gonna be about. The intro was super duper long and it really became less of a vlog and more of a scenery montage.

Going along with that first point (Of having something for the audience to latch on to), you gotta tell a story or have a main point of interest. Most Vlogs are about people's experiences. It seems like you are trying to show your audience an experience you had, but itd be a LOT more effective if we got to know you, personally. Talk to your audience, show your face, give your video some personality and character. Really I think the biggest issue is that you just need to give your channel more identity. I also think that the interesting points of a story are in the details. You are driving on the road. What songs is on the radio? Where exactly are you? Did you stop anywhere on your way to go surfing? These tiny details are the things that make a story unique.