thanks a bunch for offering your two cents. i actually did take away two things from your constructive criticism.
ill actively work on better space management to prevent the words from tangling into eachother. thats a great piece of advice.
and regarding punctuation. and considering how im naturally drawn to using capital letters. perhaps i can find a way to distinguish commas or end of sentences or full stops. despite everything being in upper case, maybe i can make the word following a period start off with a for lack of a better word, taller letter than the ones that follow it. just a distinct look to show the reader that this is the start of a new sentence.
thanks a bunch for the input. glad to hear that, while not perfect by any means, my writing was at least able to grab your attention