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Year 2194, Mitaka

The Japanese nuclear power plant "SRN" explodes for a leak of material and ashes, and also destroys nearby neighborhoods, including Shibuya and Shinjuku. The world shakes around the family of the victims. But Japan falls into panic! Houses, Roads, Entire Quarterfalls Destroyed. The fear of being contaminated with radioactive substances is very high. From the first nationwide controls, about 30% of the 50km radius population has been infected and about 27% are at risk. Japan moves to have the miraculous United States antidote for nuclear substances.

Year 2195, Mitaka

The situation seems to be a little surprise but degradation and ruins are still the starting point for Mitaka, Musashino, Chofu, Komae, Fuchu, Koganei, Kodaira, NishiTokyo, HigashiKurume, Kodaira, Suginami, Setagaya, Shibuya, Shinjuku, Nakano , Nerima. In these cities the situation is really disastrous; food, water, clothes, and other first-degree goods are short of even after the great help from other nations! The nation suffers so much that other countries also begin to depopulate, and in the space of a year Japan becomes a very poor country. Emperor Toru Kanzaki will certainly reassure everyone: "We will return to our best form in no time. As I said before, I wanted to thank the Nations again for helping us out. We will never cease to thank you, Japan will not forget these facts. Thank you"

To be continued

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