need feedback on a homebrew Warlock Patron: The Aliens

Well, not a fan of the patron to be honest, but looking at it from a purely mechanic perspective... Also, be careful I can edit your document so any ass hole could delete your whole thing. Set it to view only.

Stun tool - It's lightning damage and as such I feel it should have a reflex save and not a ranged attack, a successful reflex for half damage and no stun.

Force Field - I feel this should only work on yourself. Mechanically weaker yes, but how do you justify giving any creature within 30 feet a force field?

Guard drone - Why do you say it uses its intelligence modifier, but then you also say it does damage as if the spellcaster cast it?

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