[Official] Daily Feedback Thread, 29 Jun 2015

Hey MHH

Thanks to some things I have learned on this site, I have started moving towards more completed songs. These are unfinished, but still a lot closer than I was to finishing a song three months ago. I have a few here that I have been working on that Im hoping to get some feedback on. First thing i should say is that I am aware that the mix is shit, but Ive been more focused on writing and finding flows that work. Are my lyrics interesting at all? I never know, but i personally think I have interesting things to say sometimes. Anyways, lyrics, flow and counting bars are what i was focusing on these.

Mary Freestyle: https://soundcloud.com/joshktg/mary-freestyle-skinny-josh

One of my songs that started as a freestyle, but I thought I might have something so I just continued writing after that. I'd say maybe my most lyrical song for me. Its definitely personal. Hows my flow on this? I know a few spots its not great.

Please Don't Run: https://soundcloud.com/joshktg/please-dont-run-skinny-josh

This was the first time I tried writing a SONG rather than bars. It is the first time i have tried to write a hook. I personally dont necessarily like it, but considering i didnt know how to write a hook before its baby steps.

Questions: https://soundcloud.com/joshktg/questions-skinny-josh

This one I wrote after a little bit of a shitty week. Its a little old now, but I am gonna upload it anyways. This one is the song I tried hardest to "flow" on. I stumble over a few parts but this one is just me asking the sky whats up.

My Hands: https://soundcloud.com/joshktg/my-hands

This is my favourite song I made, cause its fun to rap. But this one I tried a few different voices and flows, its definitely my most aggressive song.

Anyways, If you listened thank you so much. Even just seeing one more play means alot at this stage. But im off to check out some of your guys' shit now. PEACE

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