Remove extra words like... more, pretty, back, very, repeatedly, really, now always, much and actually.

Split these sentences.

Suppose that there is a school teacher, say Jerry, who leads a pretty normal life like any other person does.

He goes to school every day, teaches his students, comes back home to his wife and kids, spends time with them and is very happy and satisfied with everything that he is.

There are sounds of plates being dropped, tables banging and sounds of beating; the wife threatens to leave the house for good, but Jerry, in the heat of the moment, takes a knife and stabs her repeatedly resulting in her death.

Should he really be forgiven because he now regrets what he did and always adhered to the belief that murder is wrong?

People will not care about what you have to say or what is in your mind about something, as long as you don’t act on them

Any person, from any corner of the world can live in the fantasy where he/she is the best Musician, or the best Mathematician, or the best Actor— and that certainly might help her in being excited about becoming the best, however, none of that will matter as long as the she does not act on her aspirations.

Politicians can talk big about how they will change the way the country, the state or the city will work after they get elected and how the other candidate running will destroy all the progress that has been made over the years

One of the major reasons for political aversion is the amount of hypocrisy and lies that are used in it to manipulate the public and play on people’s fear to get into power, but not do anything to make people’s lives better.

Avoid rambling at the start of the sentence. Get to the point.

Any person, from any corner of the world can live in the fantasy where he/she is the best Musician, or the best Mathematician, or the best Actor— and that certainly might help her in being excited about becoming the best, however, none of that will matter...

Passive voice here. The use of active voice makes the essay more striking.

..being dropped..

..be forgiven..

..get elected..

..been made..

..be convinced..

..are used..