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Hey there! so awhile back (like back in January!) I decided to try some editing. So I threw together a bunch of clips from me playing darksouls 2 with some effects and music. I was thinking of trying to do some more and continuing the series for 2019, but I would like to have some feedback first. Its some fairly basic stuff, (one or two keyframe parts) but one of the major things I want to know is, did I do too much editing? is it distracting? (i feel I may have went overboard in parts, but would like a second opinion) Also would like to know any other general tips you may have. Thanks! I use sony vegas 14 Edit btw, so not the pro version.

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