I liked the world and writing you did. I changed some stuff you wrote and added some things because it was fun!

"I read in a book once that it didn't always snow all the time. It use to snow water too. They called it rain. You're pretty old, did you ever get to see rain?

"No, but my grandmother did. She said it would come down faster and harder than the snow"

"I wonder if it hurt? The book I read talked about seasons, where the trees had different colored paper on them. One season, the paper would fall from the trees, like green and brown snowflakes. They called that season Fall! The pictures on them all looked oh so very pretty and colorful!"

"Hush now... There's something out here with us"