[Proofreading Request] Gift letter for best friend's wedding

Peter and Amanda,

Today is about the two of you and the special bond you've created. You have nurtured your passion, and through your perseverance and dedication to each other, we have seen it grow into true love. To honour your commitment , I'd like to share my gift. But this gift isn't just for you - it's also for your great-grandchildren.

When I realized you were destined for each other, I searched for a craftsman capable of handling a unique request. When I found him, I tasked him with creating a set of tools for you to use together to build your dreams. Within the instruments he created, he included some of the qualities I see in you: the leather wrap represents your rugged durability, and your classic beauty is mirrored in the gold gilding.

I hope you two will use these tools to create your future - giving them a patina of love as you hammer out problems and trim away your obstacles, turning houses into homes and making your dreams a reality.

Thank you for including me in your special day. I hope my gift helps your children, and children's children, see the power of love, so they can understand that it takes a bit of work to create great memories.

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