You are definitely going to need 3 {Sage with Eyes of Blue} and 3 {Blue-Eyes Alternative White Dragon}. Those two, along with standard Blue-Eyes White Dragons are the core of good Blue-Eyes decks nowadays. If you can't get Sage, I guess Protector, Maiden and Master will do okay, but just keep in mind that your deck will definitely benefit from the addition of 3 Sages.

Your spells for the most part look fine, but Mausoleum isn't actually used all that often, and neither is Burst Stream. You're also definitely gonna need {Silver's Cry} and {Return of the Dragon Lords}. I would also add in {Cards of Consonance},{Twin Twisters} and {Soul Charge} if I were you.

You probably don't need all those traps, I would just say use a couple of {Solemn Strike}, maybe a {Mirror Force} and {Torrential Tribute}.

For the extra deck, just drop Ultimate Dragon and Dragon Master Knight completely. They're both just generic normal monsters at their core, and take too many resources to set up. If you still want it, use {Neo Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon}, it has the same stats as regular Ultimate Dragon but also has an effect on it, though it's not very widely used. There's a ton of monsters you can use for the extra deck:

• {Azure-Eyes Silver Dragon} (run 2 at the most)

• {Blue-Eyes Spirit Dragon}

• {Thunder End Dragon}

• {Number 23: Lancelot, Dark Knight of the Underworld}

• {Number 107: Galaxy-Eyes Tachyon Dragon}

If you want, I can send you my decklist as an example.