Alright for some reason I cant see if my other comment sent, it looks like it didnt. I was saying that if he did do something to deserve it, for a revenge story you should go atleast a little bit in detail as to how he did something so bad to you that he deserved the treatment he got from you and his ex. The way you typed your story you are making it sound like he didnt do very much to you other than start a rumour that almost got you kicked out your football team and other small fights. What you did to him was pretty damn humiliating and magnitudes worse than what you are describing he did to you. If he deserved it that's cool. But a revenge story should also focus on making the readers understand that it was deserved. Otherwise you come off as a huge douche.