Character problems for have to be throwing shit storm after shit storm, at my main characters, who life is just becoming a non stop What the actually Fuuuuuuuaaaaaaa,,, yeah you get the point. But its like he just cannot catch a break and even at this point, I'm just like brah, I feel for you so much. Like I'm sorry your living the life you've been given, and I'm the one who wrote this shit, but I just can't help it,

Its like oh yeah, good things are having, well I cant let things get to boring, better spice it up another notch! BANG!!!

I also use bang, for dramatic sounds to often, or thud its also normal to say he/she said, or he/she adds, or the next day and then, or because, even though they are all normal used words, they get used so much you keep wanting to think of a new way to say the same thing just so it sounds interesting lol. Maybe this last problem is just a pet peeve of my own, I don't know lol.