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Title: Return to Eden

Genre: Dark Fantasy

Word count: 2231 words

Type of feedback desired: General feedback.

A link to the writing: https://www.inkshares.com/books/return-to-eden?referral_code=23c8a405

This chapter is part of a larger project. I am looking to publish this book within 1-2 years but first, I need to garner feedback and followers. I currently have a preview for the first chapter “The Fruit and The Flock.” Feel free to leave a comment on the actual website under “Discussion.” Don't forget to follow to stay updated on future chapter releases.

Thank you,

Writryx

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