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Title: Computer Science approach to Spirituality

Genre: Philosophy, Science, Spirituality

Word Count: 2516

Type Of Feedback: general impression, readability, style, if the reader manages to grasp the analogies/concepts

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aG85oZlkWw4UeHutI37Pcl214erBjBrxCOVRKcnNoYU/edit?usp=sharing

This text it is in my opinion a beautiful analogy between computer science and spirituality. To understand this text you should have some knowledge about how algorithms work, what is a graph, a wireless network, a matrix, a little bit of physics and math. Also you should have same basic notions of spirituality like flower of life, dimensions, universe laws. If you like it please provide feedback. I worked hard at those analogies.

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