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[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing

Name: Allrskepna (Placeholder)

Genre: High Fantasy with some elements of dark fantasy later on

Word Count: 1499 (1487 if you don’t count chapter titles and introductions to where something is taking place)

Feedback: Just general critiques. Would you read the rest of this story, does the pacing feel too fast, that sort of thing. If you have an issue with one specific thing, that would be appreciated as well. (A thing to note: Chapter 1 as used in this is only about half of what I plan to use for the actual chapter 1.)

Link: Allrskepna (Prologue and Chapter 1)

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