[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing

Title - GEAR

*Genre - Novel (Counter-Culture Inspired)

*Word count - 4800

*Type of feedback desired - General impression. I've got three chapters done, and I enjoy writing. I just want to know if it's got potential, and if it's something I should actively dedicate more time to.

NOTE - This is based in Scotland, and for the sake of authenticity there is some regional dialect/slang/references - similar to the likes of Trainspotting in that sense. There is also swearing and the primary theme is casual drug (cocaine) use.

*A link to the writing - https://docs.google.com/document/d/17GDpAjdRUlYF9Qmznf99OHMXcioYKZe1OvuYQatO2i4/edit?usp=sharing

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