I'm just going to analyse wipe 11, but keeping track of your performance across all the things I mention is generally good to do.
For Lightauros:
/cast [harm] Holy Prism
so that I can only cast it on enemies.Much of what I said applies to Gloria, so I won't repeat anything there. Additionally, though: * Gloria wasted 24 Holy Power over the course of the fight! That's insane. That's 8 missed Eternal Flames. You never want to waste holy power. Once I get to 3 Holy Power, I start looking for good Eternal Flame targets, and if I'm at 4 or 5 HP, I'm trying to cast an Eternal Flame as soon as humanly possible. * They cast their first Wings at the 1:32 mark. Sometimes it's ok to delay your Wings for a high-damage part of the fight, but obviously you should never wait more than 90 seconds. For most fights, I just cast Wings basically as soon as it comes off cooldown. On Kromog, I wait for him to cast his first breath or slam. * They cast lots and lots of direct heals on the tank. This can be ok, as obviously you can't let the tank die and direct heals heal the tank for more than a Beacon heal would. However, Paladin heals are strongest when you don't directly heal your Beacons. Obviously, you can't let the tank die either, so you have to use your judgement, but it's definitely something to be aware of. In a raid with two Holy Paladins, though, you should be able to let Beacon do most of the heavy lifting, and instead spot heal the raid to get the maximum benefit out of your Beacons. I personally love healing with another Holy Paladin, as I basically never have to heal the tank directly and my HPS skyrockets! * Gloria died, but never used a Healing Tonic or Lay on Hands. Basically, that should never really happen.