Weekly Thread: Self Promo Sunday

Hey. I saw your video posted yesterday and I predicted that it would be removed as soon as the mods saw (and I was right) and I have notes on your project. I can't comment on your YT vid.

  • The middle part (after the clock) was the best in tension-building, you have an eye on that so good for you
    • Followed by a "whelming" final part, no notes because you did stick the landing on the story your trying to convey, but it just came and went.
    • The whole first part in the room, or outside your house, I think, was weirdly done.

Hope that you understand that constructive criticism is part of the game, and I wrote this because you said that you're gonna ne doing alot this March.

Overall 3/5

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