[WP] you are a redditor who is trying to write the best comment for one of those r/writingprompts posts, but everything you think of is a big cliché.

Boy meets girl.

Toilet swirl,

From highschool jock,

Is ex fool Todd.

Writing script,

Fighting this.

I need it written,

They’ll say it’s bitten.

Though at that party,

Pool, shots, car scene.

He came in drunk,

She said fun.

Oh, he left with another.

Teary eyes smothered,

Her mascara,

Smudged that Tara.

I cheered her up,

I cleared her cup.

Said she’s amazing,

Now kisses daily.

Ever since then,

It’s me and her when,

Wherever we are,

Healing our scars.

And so now he’s mad at me,

Fuck his tragedy.

It’s so sad to see,

Him gettin’ to slammin’ me.

I tired of the bully,

He’s pushin’ and pullin’ me.

Met a really great mentor.

Giving me bench sores.

Guess again punk.

Flex again son.

Benchin this sum.

Wreck and then some.

Test is next month,

Chest with pecks front,

Scentin’ left funk,

Sentence rest chump.

That day he walked to me,

Faggot lame for stalkin’ me,

Tactic games the stock in me,

Lactic pains so properly.

Have it break my property,

At my face with problems see.

Havoc take this sock from me.

Packin’ weight this ought to be.

Changin’ fate wrists poppin’ free,

Hangin’ great fists shockin’ chi,

Rearrangin’ this jackass,

Makin’ him flat ass.

Now she’s so scared of me,

Afraid of ego impairin’ me.

She can’t be with a loose cannon,

Her scope of me was pannin’

To the left and not the right,

Politics opposite not the sight.

Greasy situation made worse,

Seeing this new plate in new words.

Different skinned lovers,

Bananas and the other,

Had a father in a mother,

In this nation rapin’ colors.

The pavement of the klan,

Is makin’ this man,

Wanna commit genocidal murder

For fuckin’ fuckin’ freedom.

Now she has never felt so safe, our love warmer than ever.

/r/WritingPrompts Thread