Fuck it. I've been keeping an eye on this one, and I can't stay out of it anymore. I'll review the stories OP abandoned.

I'd also like to say this, though: if OP really is an editor, they are not a good one. (Sauce: am editor.) Some of the "errors" they called out in the posted reviews were not errors at all, and much of the advice was pedantic and petty to the extreme. In fact, OP is on the Master Ball List. (Made for Team Rocket) Their fic scored a 2 out of 5 on the grammar scale, yet they're giving inaccurate criticisms towards other people's grammar. (We've got a couple 4-5 star authors in this thread and a handful of 3-stars here.) General story advice is fine, sentence structure whatever advice is fine, but do not take this person's word on grammar. Being a pro doesn't make someone perfect at their job. You're better than they are. Literally.