Made this for Randolph Pokemon in the uk. Let me know what you guys think.

Take these advices with a grain of salt.

Amazing idea, you could've put it in practice better.

  1. Script your videos. Stop going random especially the first 30 seconds. You're not MaxFoeYet, which I believe even he scripts his videos to a degree still.
  2. Title: I Built The Largest Pokemon Card EVER
  3. Thumbnail: Think about mobile users. You're too small, the card barely got any deserved frame. Photoshop: Card in the middle, your face shocked next to it.
  4. Timelapse bad( long ones). Entertaining explaination of what's going on like I'm 5 , it's the way to go.
  5. No engagement of the audience, I don't know what the AVD is like, but I'm assuming it's pretty bad.
  6. Nice editing, tho not enough.
  7. It's a nice idea over all, could've been made more entartaining tho.
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