I agree with the spirit of this post, but not the delivery...

This sounds like it was written from a place of emotion, and that will invariably dilute the message you're trying to send, and the points you're trying to make.

I agree that women can and do recieve unwanted attention in many places, and this is unacceptable. But so do men.

I agree that rape is a horrible thing, and women are at risk of it, But the actual risks are nowhere near as overblown as the media and certain groups would have you believe. And men can be raped as well.

Any venue that insists on all attendees removing their clothes with no provision for personal circumstances/health reasons, should re-evaluate, and develop more sensible policies.

In the end, it is better to insist on change regarding any issue on a case by case basis, versus an emotional screed that attempts to indict an entire gender...