Ahh, okay. That makes sense. I'll hold back on this singular piece of feedback because it's really counterintuitive to what I want to write. (I said established characters but I meant established relationship, it's just late haha. Oops.)

I made some edits based on your thoughtful advice and updated to reflect that, so thank you. I'm hoping this one last piece isn't necessary. Given how many long term role plays I've done where the characters were posted as having an established relationship (see, I got it this time. ;) ) I think it might be so I'm going to gamble on it.

But really thank you for the great feedback and not attacking me as a person. Have a good one!