Hello! My name is Bidoof and I'm the mod that is going to help you get approved and ready to start RPing. So let's get started.

• First off, your numbers. There are a couple things here, but right now the main one I want to address is that you have a left over freebee point that you can spend in merits, and I would highly recommend you get Capoeria after reading the backstory. This is a fighting style that we have dubbed the 'badass dance' fighting style, and might be something that really fits in with the backstory that you have, plus you already meet the pre-requsites for it. If this isn't something you want, you can pick up another one point merit, and that makes your numbers even.

• Your physical description is pretty good, the only issue I have here is a personal thing regarding the outfit in that it doesn't seem very.. 'RWBY'. If you look at the characters, they all have pretty complicated outfits and what not, which is one of the things that makes the characters special. I'd really like you to go a little bit more in-depth with her outfit and make it more personal, but this is just a personal thing. If you're fine with the outfit that she has, then I'm fine with it.

• Your weapons are really basic, which makes sense for a caster. Going back to how RWBY the aspects are, most every character in the show has a weapon that doubles as a gun, which is something that we like to hold true to here. If you can find some way to turn these weapons into ranged weapons as well, I highly recommend you do that. Additionally, if you could give them a name, that's also something you should look into doing as it makes it a more personal thing to the character.

• Alright, the semblance. First things first, you need to move your caster table to under this section, as it keeps it all together. I really, really like the flavor you have here, for not only the base effects but also for all of the casts. That said, the actual dice for your effects need to be balanced out.