[blank] not sure how to finish the [B] ideas?

Thank you so much for the pointers. I took your notes and made some revisions

https://i.imgur.com/okSZ3Jp.jpg

I tried playing around with the 2 lines for the B but it just didn't stick out to me. I don't know I'm still sketching and figuring it out so I might just go with it. The B does seem a little shy (for lack of words) in comparison to the other letters so I might make changes on that.

The L I tried to make the bottom part a little bigger so it's not skrunched up in the bottom.

The A was the most difficult and I'm still playing around with it. Not sure if it looks weird or not. It still looks kinda bulky to me, but I don't know.

I tried making the N and K a little thinner, let me know if you still think they need adjustment.

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