EPIC FEEDBACK LOOP FOR REWRITE - WE WANT YOUR INPUT!

I enjoyed every bit of it. I just wasn't able to wrap my head around Karen being pulled in our timeline. That part of the narrative is obviously different than the rest and I don't know if I just dislike change, or it was actually executed poorly. Also the way she commented and interacted with the community felt... "tacky"? Which I feel like is because of the difference between having a conversation with someone trying to establish themselves part of a fictional non-existent world. Sort of uncanny valley feeling that you get since you're interacting with the other person as opposed to a narrative where you immerse yourself in the story and let the author decide for you. I don't know if this makes sense... just rambling! In general I felt Karen and Ben dying the way they did, was a spectacular ending to their story, but I kept my criticism to myself because we didn't know how the new chapter is going to turn out. It was annoying to watch people lose their shit over it before it's finished. Anyhow, thanks for the experience! Can't wait for whatever that is coming next.

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