Only Silence. [OC]

I'm not trying to be rude, but if you posted it for public consumption I think some feedback is appropriate?

I don't think this is very good or very interesting. The actual text says very little and to me at least does not convey much of a story or any sort of strong emotion or idea besides loneliness? In which case the word "loneliness" or "grief" or "loss" could have just been written in every panel. Every panel, which does not look like you actually drew because these all appear to be AI generated?

It looks like you've done several of these. So here are my suggestions for the future. First, the text looks kind of weird and is just plastered on top of the background without really meshing into it anyway. It looks awkward so I would suggest that you work on that. Second, if you want to use AI pictures I would focus a lot more on trying to write interesting text to go with it.

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