NITE KLUB - HONG KONG (A song about the current situation in China)

I have absolutely no music training and only started practicing making songs/beats 23 days ago. I'm trying my best to learn (mixing, mastering, timing, everything), and like to use events or "mental environmental landscapes" (like imagining an event or scene from a movie going on, and asking myself what music would fit this situation) for inspiration.

I'm open to any criticism, I know this song is long, there's several sections and I wanted to combine traditional elements with modern elements - if there was a way I could have done that and made things tighter, please let me know! If there's anything I could have done better, please let me know!

And lastly, if anyone wants to work on anything or practice together, please send me a PM! I want more experience and am doing my best to learn! If you'd like a free beat or song, no matter the genre, I'm down for that too (hip-hop, pop/electro and funk/jazz/disco seem to be my best areas).

Thank you for taking the time to listen, and if you've shared any advice, I appreciate it greatly, as I'm trying to learn and improve.

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