[OC] [Art] Drawing my group in Star wars DND game (not done), what do you guys think? What should I do to make it look better?

Pretty good :) I especially like your robots!

I pretty much agree with the other guy. The lack of details on the trooper make him stand out and not in a good way. Could also use some work on the color work. Like, the purple lady and the scarf(?) on the other girl being to dark to pick up detail. I would also add that bumping the saturation a bit might be good. Like for for all the metal. Yes, metals gray, but it's not usually a flat gray. Giving it an ever so slight blue or red tint can really liven it up. Plus, it helps differentiate when your working with a fairly desaturated color pallet.

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