Not one of the actual sheet checkers, but I have a couple comments.
You don't have any skill specialties. Specialties are much cheaper to buy with priority ranks than karma, so getting them at chargen is a good idea. Standard ones include Sneaking(Urban), Perception(Visual), and Con(Fast Talk).
Speaking of Con, right now you have two dice for it, which basically means you will not be able to ever lie. I would try and get that up if you can.
11 dice pool for your primary weapon (automatics) is not great but workable. If you can, get a specialty in either Assault Rifles or Machine Pistols (whichever you think you'll use more) and get an implanted Smart Link (gets you +2 dice pool with weapons with a smartgun system) instead of one in your helmet (which only gives +1 and you can't always wear).
Right now, your first aid dice pool is the same as the automatic operation of a Rating 6 Medkit. If you really want to be the medic, I would try and get 6 ranks in it and a specialty (probably bullet wounds) and get Cerebral Enhancers to Rank 2. That will get you a dice pool of 14(16). Also, you do not need 6 different medkits, one is enough. And get Rank 6 stim patches, not rank 1.
Allergy(Bees) is generally considered a little cheesy. The mods might okay you with it, but expect GMs to have you randomly get stung a lot. One of my friends who has allergy(seafood) got a bowl of seafood soup dumped on him by a waiter in his last run.
You're missing a lot of standard gear, like a Fake SIN. Check these links: link 1 link 2 for some good gear guides. Also, get APDS and Stick N Shock ammo instead of regular rounds (APDS for lethal, SnS for nonlethal). And 500 rounds a gun is more than you need probably.