Starfleet JAG officer starterpack

My last comment was a compliment. I want to compliment this one too. So bad cause I liked it but...Clips themselves and analysis is pretty good. I liked seeing hidden consistency. But some text issues made it really hard to follow and appreciate the work you've obviously put in. The skinny text without outline made it harder to pick up with he eye as it bounced around and flashed info at me distracting from the very important visual parallels you're attempting to draw for me as the viewer. Dont flop the locations of the two text types it's just another obstacle for me personally. If its gonna be so text heavy, change only one thing at a time maybe so that I can follow them all as you unfold your analysis. I was worried I'd miss a subject/ narrative change as I read captions or vice versa and be lost without the benefit of context of both for that clip.

I feel that this was wordy and jumbled but it's late so I'm sorry but I hope this helps some these are just casual thoughts I like your stuff pleas keep creating

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