Yo I saw your post (here and wanted to try to help if you think the issue is related to mixing.

I'm not the best mixing engineer by any means, however I'd be willing to take a listen and try to point out some things that might help! (Only if you and your band mates as comfortable with that, of course)

I could also try and mix it, again, only if youre okay with it. Then if you end up liking my version of the mix, I'd definitely be able to record explanations of everything I did so that you're able to try it out and expand your mixing knowledge.

I'm honestly just looking for practice mixing other songs and genres, and would also like to help out others while I learn more myself!

Let me know if you're interested and I can send you some contact info!