I'm glad to say that you're headed in a good direction with this. It's good but there are some issues, nothing too major. So I'll provide my feedback in three chunks: the positives, the negatives, and the recommended potential next steps.

The Good

This feels a lot more cohesive, especially with the addition of those white rings. You've also created a nice bit of contrast which was admittedly lacking in your first flyer. On that note, the contrast grabs attention and the headline generates interest, almost titillating for the viewer. Although it leads to a bit of a "what else," conclusion.

The Bad

There isn't a resolution to the what else conclusion, no creation of a sense of desire. The dialogue is like "yeah I need design but why do I need your design."

In my opinion, I'd advise against showing your work on the flyer itself. My reasoning is that it could potentially turn away your prospects. They may take a look at the work on display and may not be enticed to continue with their inquiry. Also, you may run into some brand confusion or some trouble by displaying work based on established IP's (Assassin's Creed in this case) when advertising your services. I doubt something like that would happen in your case, being an independent contractor with a significantly lower market visibility than Ubisoft but it's best to avoid that sort of thing since you presumably have no affiliation with them.

You've gone in the opposite extreme with your copy. Before it was too much, now it's basically non existent.

Proposed Next Steps

Keep the current headline and style for the logo. It's seriously awesome.

Add some enticing copy that proposes your value and encourages the end user/viewer to continue with their inquiry. Don't make it about you but what you can give and try to begin a dialogue with the viewer. For example it could be something like "let's bridge the gap between strategy and execution." Notice how there's this invitation to be a part of the process as well as the proposition that you can help bridge that gap.

Lastly, you'll probably want to add a call to action. This is as simple as adding "visit our site for more information" or "call this number to get in touch." You've caught the attention of the viewer, generated desire, and now you're giving them an actionable means of executing on that desire.

Here's kind of an example I mocked up that gives you a better idea, visually, of what I'm advising. image